tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3230993476536687336.post2771699767742542479..comments2023-05-17T19:39:33.461+12:00Comments on Paige: Antarctica PES Blogs Administrator 2013Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16985366576305207242noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3230993476536687336.post-16161958836748864472013-06-06T09:14:58.706+12:002013-06-06T09:14:58.706+12:00Okay Thankyou
Okay Thankyou<br /><br />Paigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04916846955833145812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3230993476536687336.post-48771743681773111772013-05-30T10:55:02.287+12:002013-05-30T10:55:02.287+12:00Interesting story Paige. Remember that a narrative...Interesting story Paige. Remember that a narrative has four paragraphs at least [Introduction, problem, action and solution]. I would also consider using the persons name a bit less. Instead of saying Chris Marks all of the time use, he or his. Don't forget a title for your post.Mr Chris Markshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14912841501575471267noreply@blogger.com