Our Writing Couplets

Line 1:

After playing with fertilizer

Always use hand sanitizer

Line 2:

Always use your brain

Or else it will rain

Line 3:

Our teacher is Mr Marks

And another one Mr Bark’s

Line 4:

I like to play with cow’s

Because they go meeoooo

Line 5:

Everyones likes Farming

Even when their driving

Line 6:

I like to play

When i have clay

Lizara and I have been working on these during our class time

Cause and Effect Chart

Cause and Effect Chart

Instructions: As you read, list causes (the things being done) in the left column and their effects (what happens as a result of what is being done) in the right column.

Topic:  Farming and its effect on the environment.

Cause		Effect
Compactions	➜	The plants can’t grow.
They cut down trees	➜	They want more paddocks to put more cows in and make more milk and sell it to make money
Farmers drain the water in some lands	➜	they do this because they need dry land to make more crops and also more money if they sell it
Soil Erosion	➜	It is an ongoing concern because we lose heaps of soil
Fertilizer	➜	makes pollution

Shakespeare's Beach Presentation

This is a presentation about my weekend. Please Comment!!!!!!!

Te Ika a Maui( The FIsh Of Maui) By Ariana and Me

This is a movie about how new zealand was formed and who formed it.

We hope you enjoy :} :) :D B-)

I Heard A Whisper But Nobody Was There?????

I heard a whisper but no-one was there .....

“ Come over here” whispered a voice. “ Who’s there”. Khaia looked around but nobody was their. Khaia got scared. She went into her bedroom and put her headphones on. Khaia turned on her music and she lay down on her bed. “ Come over her. Khaia Come to me “. Khaia thought she was crazy. She ran down stairs like a maniac. Khaia looked around but she saw nothing. All she saw was a empty lounge.

The next day Khaia went to school. During maths class Khaia got bored so she started to draw. She drew until maths class was over.The bell rang for recess. Khaia had her lunch with her friends Ariana, Lucy, Brooklyn and Marilyn. After they ate their lunch they all went to play on the playground. Khaia heard the whisper again. This time the whisper said “ Khaia ditch your friends go find others. You're better than them”. Khaia looked around and she saw that nobody was looking so Khaia just left. She did as the whisper told her. The whisper made Khaia do other bad stuff like throw spit balls  and kick other people and other really bad stuff.

When Khaia got home there was a nice homemade lunch on the table and it had a note next to it. It said “ Hi Khaia your father and I have gone to see your Aunt Hope for a bit here is your lunch. Your dinner is in the fridge. Bye”  

Khaia  had the lunch and then went to lie down on the couch. The whisper got into Khaia again. It said “ Hay Khaia why don’t “ Khaia blocked her ears before the whisper could finish. the whisper talked louder so Khaia blocked her ears even harder. Then Khaia looked around and she actullay saw something she saw a person. That person was Ariana. She was the whisper all along. Khaia was a bit surprised and mad. She was mad because Ariana pulled her away from her friends and she told Khaia to do all that bad stuff to other people. She was surprised because it was Ariana and ariana would never do that.

In the End Khaia rang  her parents first and asked if they can have a small party. They said yes. So Khaia called all her friends and they all lived happily ever after.

Orienteering With Kevine

Today we did orienteering

Kevine and I were partners and we had a time of 20 minutes and 6 seconds .
We think that was fun.

We can't wait until next week 

The Plane Crash

“ I'm hot Granddad Jake” moaned Israel. “ I know. What can I do about it” the Jake said back". “How about I ask mum and dad if we can use the jet”  Israel  said excited. “Sounds like a plan” said granddad. When Israel called his mum and dad this is what he said “ Hi Mum hi Dad I was wondering if granddad and I could use the jet to go for a plane ride to New Zealand since it is so hot here in Malaysia” mum and dad said “ Okay we will ring the pilot and he will come and pick you guys up. Okay” “Okay. Mum bye”

A few hours later the pilot came with the plane. The pilot asked for the boy’s name and he said “ Israel” “Jump on” said the pilot. The pilot asked “ So where are we going today”. “To New Zealand, Auckland please”. “ Okay off we go”. Israel and the granddad were playing games, eating and doing other fun stuff until....They felt the crash so they went to see the pilot Jershon and ask what in the world was going on. Jershon said “ The plane is crashing”.

The pilot grabbed the last parachute and jumped off leaving Israel and Jake on the plane. Jake remembered how to fly a plane because he used to be a pilot. So Jake sat in the pilot’s seat and he started to fly the plane upwards and Israel was just observing Jake flying the plane.

Israel and Jake rang mom and dad and told them everything that had happened. Mum and Dad said “ Wow that must have a journey”. “ It was. It was so awesome”.


This is the rubric that Lizara and Mua marked me on

Crazy Guy 2

Once upon a time there lived an old man called David. David was a busy man. He had two kids and there names were Israel and Rachel. The family lived on a farm. Rachel and Israel helped there old man out by feeding the animals, getting the cows milk and other stuff like planting.

On hot day when they family was harvesting it’s crops and  planting more the weirdest thing happened. A guy popped up from the corn. The family screamed and hit the man. The man said “Oh sorry I didn't mean to scare you guys”. The kids said “Sorry for hitting you”. “It’s Okay”. The man told them his name and his name was Eddie.

The old man said to Eddie”Why did you do that?” “I thought you would laugh at my face” said Eddie. The old man said “Do you have a home?” Eddie answered “No”. “Why don’t you come and live with me and my kids”. No way. He’s weird.Get him out of here now”.Eddie said yes. The kids played pranks on Eddie. They egged him on the head, they put him in the river when he was sleeping, and put fish in his pillows. The kids wanted Eddie gone. Eddie told the old man about the kids playing pranks. The old man told the kids to go in their room and think about what they have done.

This is my edited Version

Crazy Guy

Once upon a time there lived an old man called David. David was a busy man. He had two kids and there names were Israel and Rachel. The family lived on a farm. Rachel and Israel helped there old man out by feeding the animals, getting the cows milk and other stuff like planting.

On hot day when they family was harvesting it’s crops and  planting more the weirdest thing happened. A guy popped up from the corn. The family screamed and hit the man. The man said “Oh sorry I didn't mean to scare you guys”. The kids said “Sorry for hitting you”. “It’s Okay”. The man told them his name and his name was Eddie.

The old man said to Eddie”Why did you do that?” “I thought you would laugh at my face” said Eddie. The old man said “Do you have a home?” Eddie answered “No”. “Why don’t you come and live with me and my kids”. No way. He’s weird.Get him out of here now”.Eddie said yes. The kids played pranks on Eddie. They egged him on the head, they put him in the river when he was sleeping, and put fish in his pillows. The kids wanted Eddie gone. Eddie told the old man about the kids playing pranks. The old man told the kids to go in their room and think about what they have done.

This is my Draft writing. My next post is going to be Edited writing. :}

BaaaBaaaa

In this photo we have a sheep.  This is a little story about it

Once upon a time there lived a sheep who just got sheared. this sheep was called BaaaBaaaa. BaaaBaaaa liked to get dirty so BaaaBaaaa started rolling in the mud. BaaaBaaaa's mum and dad got very angry one day when BaaaBaaaa got super dirty and he dripped the dirtiness on his parents stuff. BaaaBaaaa's parents chucked him out. So BaaaBaaaa found a new home and lived happily ever after.

THE END

The Stubborn Witch Free Blog Writing

Once upon a time there lived a Stubborn Witch called Emma  how once became a president. This is how.

It was a nice sunny day and the Emma was planting plants that eat people. The neighbours walked pass and whispered to each other and this is what they were saying “Wow what a stubborn Witch she it what if she it the next president. We would all die”

The Emma had over heard the neighbours talking about her. Emma decided to  run for president but how? She decided to go to the president in person

     

To be Continued :} See you later

My Farming Questions

• Why do cows sit down when it is raining  
• Why are animals so important to human 
• What kind of animal brings out milk and then the milk turns into cheese 
• When is a good time to farm 
• Where could a farm be 
•  Who might be the right person to farm
•   How do we know when to feed the animals 
•   How  old can your animals be till it is past 
• Which animal is the most important to human

Mrs Goat And The 7 Kids Re-written By Paige and Khaia

Once upon a time their was a mother goat who was going to the supermarket but before she left her kids she said “ Do not open the door to anybody no matter what ever”. The kids said “Okay mother”. So the mother went and a few minutes later the BIG BAD WOLF came knocking on the door. Knock Knock Knock. “Who’s there” the kids said. “I am your mother. I have some  sweets for you. Now open the door”. The kids said  “ You are not our mother. Mother has a sweet voice like MUSIC. So the wolf went to the music teacher and said “ Teach me how to have a sweet voice like MUSIC or I will bite your beak off”. “Okay” said the music teacher.

The wolf ran to the house the kids were in and said “ Open the door for your sweet mother I have some ice cream for you”. “She has the voice like mother. Stick you’re paw in the letterbox”. The wolf stuck his hand in the letterbox and the kids said “ You are not mother you are the big bad wolf Mother  has a white hoof” So the wolf went to the artist and said “ Paint my paw white like a goat.”

The next hour or so he ended up tricking the  kids to let him in but the littlest kid jumped i a bucket of coal  and the wolf ate the other 6.  The Mother goat came home and the littlest kid told the mother everything and the mother gave the wolf a SAMOAN HIDING and the 6 kids came out of the wolf’s mouth.

THE END

Raps For Reading

This is my song about reading raps
and why reading is awesome.

Hope you Enjoy












There are two rap rules what are they?

TOBY THE SPIDER

Once upon a time there lived a magical spider who was called Toby. Toby  lived in a old oak  tree.Toby always made fun of people. When they walked past he would make their pants fall down or tie their shoe laces so they can fall on the concrete. Toby did this because of all the people that stomped on spiders whack them with newspaper and kill them. He wanted revenge.

The next day Toby  saw one of his mates and said “ Hey mate what are you up too”? The other spider said ”I am just going to the shop to catch some flies. Do you want to come and get out of that old tree”? “No thanks. I love my tree”. “ Okay. It’s up to you. Think about what you are doing to people”.

So Toby’s mate went and Toby thought long and hard about what his friend said to him.  He thought that if he stopped then he said to himself...” If i keep doing this then i am hurting people”.Toby went to the shop to see his friend to thank him. When he saw his friend he said “ Thanks for the good advice. I think I will stay here instead of hurting people”.

The moral of my story was to never hurt anybody for no reason.

It helps me by not doing  things i don’t really need to do

Rhyming Couplets

A  couplet is a two lined poem or lyric. The last word of each line ryhme

I saw a bouncy ping-pong ball
To my eye it was really small

One day I wanted to fly
So i had to try and try

I had a present for my dad
I and he was so so glad

Paige Reading Interview

My Punctuation Goals

This is my punctuation goals 
Blue means I want to work on 

Yellow means I think i got it finished 

Green means Mr. Marks has checked it and It is good 

Cross Country

On Thursday 22nd of August we had Cross Country.  A Cross Country it when you run either short distance or long distance. First up was the five year old boys. They went around the top field and round  half of the reserve. It must have been so tired when they finished and hot. My group was Mataatua( Green ). Our group came third to last. At least they tried.

When all the juniors were done it was the 9 year old boys turn. Mr. Burt put the siren on and they were off. The boys were gone in 1 second they were fast.

The first boy was in Tanui.

After a while it was our turn. I was so nervous me and Quasia ran together. Mr . Burt Told us where to go. When we started I was alright then after a while i was tired. My feet were really muddy and yuck.

After all me and Quasia crossed the line together. The first girl was Asena, Second was Kevine and third was Rebekah. Me and Quasia came third to last.

I was so PROUD of myself

The Three Little Pigs

Title: Three Little Pigs

Start Writing Here

Once upon a time their was 3 little pigs. 2 not smart one and 1 smart one. Their Mother told them to go make their own houses.The first pig was not smart and he made his house out of hay. There was a wolf who was hungry and saw the house of hay and blew it down. The second pig built it’s house out of sticks. The wolf blew the sticks down. The third pig was smart and built it’s house out of bricks. He was safe.

The moral of the story  is Don't take the easy way out and plan before you do. It helps me by not rushing my work and always plan

The Emperors new clothing

Your Challenge: To explain how a morale from a fable applies to your life

You will need to think about:

• What fable you will choose and why
• How many and what characters will be in your story
• Your use of speech and the correct punctuation
• A Problem and solution
• Your attention to detail

Plan:

Paragraph 1: Retell and summarise an Aesop Fable of your choice

Paragraph 2: Explain the morale of the fable.

Paragraph 3: How does the morale apply to your life? What have you learnt?

Title: Emperor's New Clothing

Start Writing Here

This story is about an Emperor who was excessively fond of new clothes, that he spent all his money in dress. He did not care about his servants all he cared about was himself and how he looks. He will only go out to watch theatre or plays when he has the chance to show off. He had a different suit for each hour of the day.

The Moral of the story is Don't assume others are right simply because you perceive their status to be higher than yours. This means do not think you are better than everyone else.

The moral of the story helped me make my own

Snow White and The Seven Dwarfs

Once upon a time  in a great castle a King’s daughter grew up very happily. Her name was Snow White. She had hair as black night, lips as red as roses, skin as white as snow.  Snow White’s mother had died from an poisonous apple. The King had married another lady. This lady did not like Snow White at all.The stepmother was evil. She had a magic mirror and every day she went to it and said Mirror Mirror on the wall who’s the fairest of them all. The mirror replied you are my queen.

When Snow White grew up the evil stepmother hated her guts. The evil stepmother asked the mirror... Mirror Mirror on the wall  the fairest of them all. The mirror replied sorry to say but it is Snow White. The stepmother got furious and wanted Snow White dead. The stepmother sent one of her servants to take Snow White out to the forest. The servant did as he was told.

Night came and the servant did not return for Snow White. The stepmother had also told the servant to cut her head off and bring it to her. The servant did not want to kill Snow White so he got a pumpkin and some hay and decorate it to look like Snow White. Snow White had wandered around and soon found a small cottage. The cottage was a mess so Snow White cleaned it up. After cleaning up Snow White felt hungry. Snow White looked in the fridge and found some bread.

Back at the Castle the stepmother got the pumpkin head and went to ask the mirror... Mirror Mirror on the wall who’s the fairest of them all. The mirror replied  Snow White it still the fairest of them all.  Snow White it in a cottage in a cottage that belongs to seven Dwarfs.  The stepmother got furious and wanted Snow White dead. The stepmother made a potion and put the potion in a apple. She made herself an old woman.

Snow White was tired after the bread and she went upstairs and took a nap. The owners of the cottage where home. They were seven Dwarfs. The seven Dwarfs were surprised to find  their home clean. They all went upstairs and to their surprise they found a wonderful girl.

Snow White was told to not open the door for strangers. Later on an old lady came to gave Snow white an apple.It was the stepmother. The stepmother gave Snow White the poisonous apple and Snow White collapsed on the floor. When the dwarfs got home they saw Snow White on the floor they put her in a glass coffin and they went out to put her down.  They left her in the forest and then a prince came by and opened the lid of the coffin. The prince kissed Snow White and Snow white woke up. The Prince put her on his horse and they rode off together.

The witch had died and They all lived...

Happily Ever After

The End

listen to ‘Paige Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs’ on Audioboo

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Hansel and Gretel Writing

Once upon a time in a dark forest there was a cottage. In that cottage there was a family. There was Hansel who  is the a boy who always looked after his sister who cries alot. Gretel is a girl who can cry easily.But at the end of this story it all changed. There was a woodcutter who was there father which was a easy man to persuade..There was an self centered Stepmother who had a problems with Hansel and Gretel and wanted to get rid of them.

The Step Mother thought that their was too  many mouths to feed so she nagged her husband to take Hansel and Gretel miles away from  the cottage. Luckily Hansel overheard their conversation  and went out and filled his pockets with white pebbles then went back to sleep.

The next day the father took his kids out to the forest and abandoned them. Remember Hansel filled his pockets with white pebbles. Hansel had left a trail and when moonlight hit they saw the white pebbles and followed them back. The Stepmother saw that the kids were back and she nagged her husband to take them out again. All they had for dinner was bread. Hansel did not eat his bread.

The next day the father took his kids out to the forest and abandoned them. Hansel noticed and he left a trail for them to get back forgetting about all the hungry birds in the forest. When their father left them they noticed that the breadcrumbs were gone. Gretel started to cry. Hansel said”Don’t be scared  Gretel I am here” Gretel quietly sobbed. They wandered around the forest and soon they found a house made out of candy.

They were eating the house to bits when a witch came out and captured them in cages. The Witch liked to bake kids and she eats them. Hansel got trapped in the cage and Gretel was told to clean up. This is the part where Gretel gets brave. The witch had bad eyesight from when she was a childhood. Gretel grab some butter and smeared it all over the witches glasses. Gretel pushed Hansel out of the way and pushed the witch in the oven. A few minutes later  their father came to get them because the police had rung them and told them everything that happened. To their surprise the Stepmother died by no food.

THE END