Orienteering With Kevine

Today we did orienteering

Kevine and I were partners and we had a time of 20 minutes and 6 seconds .
We think that was fun.

We can't wait until next week 

The Plane Crash

“ I'm hot Granddad Jake” moaned Israel. “ I know. What can I do about it” the Jake said back". “How about I ask mum and dad if we can use the jet”  Israel  said excited. “Sounds like a plan” said granddad. When Israel called his mum and dad this is what he said “ Hi Mum hi Dad I was wondering if granddad and I could use the jet to go for a plane ride to New Zealand since it is so hot here in Malaysia” mum and dad said “ Okay we will ring the pilot and he will come and pick you guys up. Okay” “Okay. Mum bye”

A few hours later the pilot came with the plane. The pilot asked for the boy’s name and he said “ Israel” “Jump on” said the pilot. The pilot asked “ So where are we going today”. “To New Zealand, Auckland please”. “ Okay off we go”. Israel and the granddad were playing games, eating and doing other fun stuff until....They felt the crash so they went to see the pilot Jershon and ask what in the world was going on. Jershon said “ The plane is crashing”.

The pilot grabbed the last parachute and jumped off leaving Israel and Jake on the plane. Jake remembered how to fly a plane because he used to be a pilot. So Jake sat in the pilot’s seat and he started to fly the plane upwards and Israel was just observing Jake flying the plane.

Israel and Jake rang mom and dad and told them everything that had happened. Mum and Dad said “ Wow that must have a journey”. “ It was. It was so awesome”.


This is the rubric that Lizara and Mua marked me on

Crazy Guy 2

Once upon a time there lived an old man called David. David was a busy man. He had two kids and there names were Israel and Rachel. The family lived on a farm. Rachel and Israel helped there old man out by feeding the animals, getting the cows milk and other stuff like planting.

On hot day when they family was harvesting it’s crops and  planting more the weirdest thing happened. A guy popped up from the corn. The family screamed and hit the man. The man said “Oh sorry I didn't mean to scare you guys”. The kids said “Sorry for hitting you”. “It’s Okay”. The man told them his name and his name was Eddie.

The old man said to Eddie”Why did you do that?” “I thought you would laugh at my face” said Eddie. The old man said “Do you have a home?” Eddie answered “No”. “Why don’t you come and live with me and my kids”. No way. He’s weird.Get him out of here now”.Eddie said yes. The kids played pranks on Eddie. They egged him on the head, they put him in the river when he was sleeping, and put fish in his pillows. The kids wanted Eddie gone. Eddie told the old man about the kids playing pranks. The old man told the kids to go in their room and think about what they have done.

This is my edited Version

Crazy Guy

Once upon a time there lived an old man called David. David was a busy man. He had two kids and there names were Israel and Rachel. The family lived on a farm. Rachel and Israel helped there old man out by feeding the animals, getting the cows milk and other stuff like planting.

On hot day when they family was harvesting it’s crops and  planting more the weirdest thing happened. A guy popped up from the corn. The family screamed and hit the man. The man said “Oh sorry I didn't mean to scare you guys”. The kids said “Sorry for hitting you”. “It’s Okay”. The man told them his name and his name was Eddie.

The old man said to Eddie”Why did you do that?” “I thought you would laugh at my face” said Eddie. The old man said “Do you have a home?” Eddie answered “No”. “Why don’t you come and live with me and my kids”. No way. He’s weird.Get him out of here now”.Eddie said yes. The kids played pranks on Eddie. They egged him on the head, they put him in the river when he was sleeping, and put fish in his pillows. The kids wanted Eddie gone. Eddie told the old man about the kids playing pranks. The old man told the kids to go in their room and think about what they have done.

This is my Draft writing. My next post is going to be Edited writing. :}

BaaaBaaaa

In this photo we have a sheep.  This is a little story about it

Once upon a time there lived a sheep who just got sheared. this sheep was called BaaaBaaaa. BaaaBaaaa liked to get dirty so BaaaBaaaa started rolling in the mud. BaaaBaaaa's mum and dad got very angry one day when BaaaBaaaa got super dirty and he dripped the dirtiness on his parents stuff. BaaaBaaaa's parents chucked him out. So BaaaBaaaa found a new home and lived happily ever after.

THE END

The Stubborn Witch Free Blog Writing

Once upon a time there lived a Stubborn Witch called Emma  how once became a president. This is how.

It was a nice sunny day and the Emma was planting plants that eat people. The neighbours walked pass and whispered to each other and this is what they were saying “Wow what a stubborn Witch she it what if she it the next president. We would all die”

The Emma had over heard the neighbours talking about her. Emma decided to  run for president but how? She decided to go to the president in person

     

To be Continued :} See you later

My Farming Questions

• Why do cows sit down when it is raining  
• Why are animals so important to human 
• What kind of animal brings out milk and then the milk turns into cheese 
• When is a good time to farm 
• Where could a farm be 
•  Who might be the right person to farm
•   How do we know when to feed the animals 
•   How  old can your animals be till it is past 
• Which animal is the most important to human