Tuesday, 5 March 2013

Mystery Mystery Mystery

This is my writing test. I did this in 40 minutes with no editing.Later in the week you will see an edited one on the same thing.

It was just a normal day at Pt England School when Room 18 was in their Litracy group.As they started their work Mr Marks was looking for good behaving kids to go on their netbooks. Mr Marks choose seven girls.They were Lucy, Nikki, Puawai, Ariana, Mao, Khaia and Me.

So we went to get our netbooks but guess what they were not there.”Strange i left it right here”We said to each other. We looked around the class but they nowhere to be found.So we asked Mr Marks if he knew where they were.”There in the cupboard”He said. He took us to the cupboard. But they were not there.

We looked in Room 16 and 17. But then we got an idea maybe there was a thief. So we did a check in everyones bag that was in Mr Marks Litracy group.But was not them . We checked Room 17’s bags nothing. Our lat hope was Room 16’s bag’s.

We checked and we found seven netbooks in Anisha’s bag. “What do you got to say for yourself” “I can explain” she said. Tell to Mr Bert.After that we got to play on our netbooks.

1 comment:

  1. Hi paige that was so cool to read. Keep up the great work. Make sure you fix a little bit up ok. Have great day. Nice work and keep on doing what your doing. maybe see you. Bye.