Once upon a time there lived an old man called David. David was a busy man. He had two kids and there names were Israel and Rachel. The family lived on a farm. Rachel and Israel helped there old man out by feeding the animals, getting the cows milk and other stuff like planting.
On hot day when they family was harvesting it’s crops and planting more the weirdest thing happened. A guy popped up from the corn. The family screamed and hit the man. The man said “Oh sorry I didn't mean to scare you guys”. The kids said “Sorry for hitting you”. “It’s Okay”. The man told them his name and his name was Eddie.
The old man said to Eddie”Why did you do that?” “I thought you would laugh at my face” said Eddie. The old man said “Do you have a home?” Eddie answered “No”. “Why don’t you come and live with me and my kids”. No way. He’s weird.Get him out of here now”.Eddie said yes. The kids played pranks on Eddie. They egged him on the head, they put him in the river when he was sleeping, and put fish in his pillows. The kids wanted Eddie gone. Eddie told the old man about the kids playing pranks. The old man told the kids to go in their room and think about what they have done.
This is my Draft writing. My next post is going to be Edited writing. :}