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Thursday 11 April 2013

PAIGE MARS BAR


Mars Bar
By  Norman Billbrough



Main Characters:
Mrs Jane who takes the new guy too meet Jason
Jason the person that looks after the new kid Author
Author the new kid but he it like a robot


Setting:
At the school in the park and in the closet

Orientation:
Albert the new boy  goes with Mrs Jane while she  asks Jason to look after him for the first day of school. Albert the new boy has a nose like a hose pipe and ears so wide apart the can reach his.


Problem:
Jason had to share his lunch with Albert but Jason can not find him.

Action
Jason looked around he saw a flashing light coming from the cupboard and he opened the cupboard and he saw Albert with a plug in the middle of his bald head and plugged into the wall.

Outcome
Jason found out that Albert the new kid was a robot because  straight after school Albert speed off and Jason asks Albert
“Why can’t you stick around “  
I will miss the ship home said Albert
Jason just turned the corner and he found Albert  in a spaceship


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