Monday, 15 April 2013


I was walking down the street and looking at funny shape clouds when I saw an elephant on the power lines. There were shoes but there are always shoes on the power lines. When I saw the elephant I thought, “Why isn't the elephant getting electrocuted ?”

I thought about it for a while and realized that it was not real. I stared at it and then my friends Kevine and Ofa came and asked me what i was doing “ I am staring at the elephant”  They asked why. I was looking at clouds and I saw the elephant  


1 comment:

  1. Hey Paigee,
    I love the why you wrote your story, I noticed that you have writin a lot of words that are huge like, ELECTROCUTED and more that I can't name, and buy the way I love that you couldn't finish it off so you said to be continued.